Friday, February 6, 2009

Valentines Day Poem- Baring It All Comments

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Here I am where I never wanted to be,
On the edge of the mountain,
In the depths of the sea,
Baring all that I ever had,
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Reshma Ramesh
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 08 February 2009

Wooooooooooooooooosh! ...Talk about a change of pace, indeed! I can hear the siren-sounds of fire-trucks on route to my place, to extinguish my flaming P.C. wires that your Valentine poem created & fulminated! ! ! Tastefully sensuous! F j R 2009

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Greenwolfe 1962 07 February 2009

Well, this isn't like my Valentine's Day poem. I'll say. This was lovely to read though. The kind of thing that Valentine's are made for. The beauty of a woman, and the touch of her hand. GW62

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Sadiqullah Khan 07 February 2009

In Silence You left the lines blank for me love And again you ask why wrote my plaint When you are in front of me I am lost In the beauty of your hair your lips In the gazelle eyes and the music From the tongue that licks honey When I open my mouth for my words You place your finger on your lips Enter the silence of my love else I leave you in the oblivions vast Like a flute from the reed in silence Wail I long as separated from beloved You make my silence in colors float When in the bloom of spring I enter The garden where nightingale sings In silence sitting by the rose In silence my love I live in thou 7/2/2009

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Tsira Goge 06 February 2009

The sincere passion dominates here, it's nice Valentines dey for you...10... tsira

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 06 February 2009

Wow so much beautiful passion for valentines day...10

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