Monday, February 13, 2017

Valentine Song Comments

Rating: 4.6

No specks of cloud roam
The sky is blue and clear
From heart, the cuckoo sings
I'm in love, oh dear!
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Nosheen Irfan
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Pamela Sinicrope 24 February 2017

This is so sweet. Love this! The flitting, flirting playfulness of your words, so light and lovely. Perfect for love. Well done and inspired use of rhyme. Thanks Nosheen. I'll add this to my favorites list to read when I need a lift.

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Barry Middleton 16 February 2017

I love it. A 10! Not getting notifications again I guess.

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Bill Cantrell 14 February 2017

Beatiful poem, smooth with simple and pure

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Akhtar Jawad 14 February 2017

A sweet song that can change tears into smiles.

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Valsa George 14 February 2017

Yes, no more tears! Let love fill your heart and let it overflow....! Altogether a very pleasant ambiance with the blue sky above, birds circling, butterflies flitting and pansies perfuming the pathways! Happy Valentine's Day, Nosheen!

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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