Tuesday, February 17, 2009

Valentine's Without You Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the Night of Valentine's.
The lovers recreate and drinking wine.
The candles floodlight the the tables when they dine
in the star-full sky the love moon shines
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Shahad Raad
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Bob Blackwell 23 July 2009

Separations are full of longing's for return of loved one, your cry I hope is heard.

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Melissa Thompson 15 May 2009

I like your style.nice

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Maxim Muyu 21 February 2009

This is all very great and I love the great syle contained in it.

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Sandy Vanity 17 February 2009

that was a very sad poem and i loved i realy felt it and i know how it feels.

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Fay Slimm 17 February 2009

A sad cry from the heart Shahad - - but well written and has some apt phrases which describe the night very well...... a 10 from me - best wishes from Fay...

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