Thursday, February 14, 2019

Valentine's Impossible Dream Comments

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How much better
The world would be
If instead of being mean,
Most of us were in love,
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Sandra Feldman
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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 February 2019

A most peaceful world we will have then. But the reality is very disappointing, as we all learn to know. Excellent points of proposal. I am constantly in love with poetry and the world you have described here is true imaginable. Gorgeous write. Very impressing poem..

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Susan Williams 15 February 2019

EXACTLY! ! ! ! ! All children, teenagers and adults should be encouraged to write poetrym short storiesm essays, songs. Writing is not just for the hugely gifted it is a natural right

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 February 2019

This is a wonderful poem though I find a disappointing tone reflected in this Valentine's Day poem! Many times things never happen what we expect....many times we find ourselves friendless (a valuable poem goes reader less) ...still we should go on without expecting anything! Enjoy poetry dear friend...love your passion forgetting expectation...10

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