Monday, February 9, 2009

! Valentine's Dream Comments

Rating: 3.0

THE DREAM

IN A DREAM I SAW YOU WEEP A SINGLE SOLITARY TEAR;
IT CAME FROM THAT EYE OF HAZEL FLECTED WITH GREEN,
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JAMES ROBERTS
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Original Unknown Girl 13 February 2009

Beautiful scribings. It conjured up a lot of imagery. Liked it... HG: -) xx

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Fay Slimm 13 February 2009

This has a wistfull beauty and is so well arranged in phrase and line - - a more than 10 - - from Fay.....10+ ++ +

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Fiona Davidson 09 February 2009

Excellent write James...thank you...Fi...10+

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