Valentine's Day Memory Comments

What a fun and poignant tale all wrapped up so neatly it had to be the perfect Valentine's day present! (You just love those high-slitted dresses now don't you Zen?): -) HG xx

Good and great story! A surprise for you, humorous, witty, superb. Holsters at a Valentine Day party! Somebody's got to do it! xxElysabeth

Swiftly paced, quasi-objectively related memory... truly stylish work here. t x

Really nice poem n the story. It kept my interest to reading it all. XO Francesca

This was a revealing and interesting story, Zen. I wonder why you never did go on a date with Geovanna. I kept reading to the end, as you kept my interest. A good portrait of an Italian family. They love to eat and love to shove food at people. I know, I'm Sicilian, first generation American, and I remember lots of stories about the mafia, too. Well done, poet. best, alicia

Beautifully written. I agree with Wendy. Keep going! Love, AT :)