Valentine's Day Bonanza- Senryu Comments

Attention people. Valentine's Day Bonanza. Broken Hearts for Sale! sad valentine10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

a sad one vaibhav.......but it happens! i liked it.

Wonderful satire that made me burst out laughing.

true it is a bitter truth...nicely written

clever poem and a bitter truth.... thanks.

tickled, blended with truth. shanmugam

This is a clever and well expressed poem, Vaibhav, but it is NOT a haiku. A haiku is only about nature and nothing else. Your poem would qualify as a senryu, which is about everything else except nature. My familiarity with the Japanese forms extends back a good number of years although I am not what could be called a 'purist.' Still, this is a fine senryu poem and does meet the 5-7-5 syllable count properly. Carl.

Its a day when broken hearts don't rejoice. The idea was great.

Unique piece, made me smile, well said, 10 Lynda xx

I do detect a refreshing, astute wit, amidst your serious work...and i like it fine! Cupids on e-bay Selling red bows, and arrows St. Valentine bids F j R 2009

' Valentine's Day ' Bonanza...... Broken hearts for sale.....10 from me as a token (of love) .

Very amusing. But I am sorry for all of those broken hearts. Warmest regards, Sandra

All part of the love game broken hearts. Sell some KRAZY GLUE maybe that will help.

A funny one for sure. A wonderful Haiku! The kind that makes you smile all day. GW62

A nice, humorous write, my friend. Check close, some might just be slightly bent. Thanks Richard

ahhhhhhhh a cute one here what about a 'quick fix' crazy glue on sale too for easy fix on broken hearts anjali

better you try to sell some patching up glue! ...funny piece, Vaibhav...

nice with a punch and satire.10 Mamta

amusing.....at low...low prices? s m i l e....smile...smile... nice...written with a happy heart.... welcomes valentine's day with a smile...... thanks for the share... 10++++

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