Tuesday, February 12, 2013

Valentine's Day Comments

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There is no more lonesome day, no signle saddest way to die

There is no time that can murder as brutaly
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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 25 February 2013

The image of plucking peals is very fine as the course of narration.

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Titi Dale 15 February 2013

This is amazing :) you say you are a beginner, but even so, this is great! Why not try rhyming? Btw, this is a great poem :) Titi

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