Why do lovers sigh
Under the curved moon's eye?
Perhaps a pink heart's best
Kept in a lover's chest?
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I agree....what else should it hold? when it is him you love? ? ?
I didn't think it was really bad. In fact, its quite good actually. Its short and it says I love you. I can't think of what else is required. GW62
Too good for a valentine card. Here's one for the day after Valentine's: Rose are red, violets are blue, But even a bunch of daffs would do! F
Sorry. But you couldn't write anything bad if you tried. t x
This is rather sweet - and a refreshing change from the 'hallmark' variety. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
ohhhhhhhh such a beautiful poem........................sweet and cute.......