Valentine Novel Comments

Oh poet, you have created a beautiful world for the Valentine. The eyes you met have changed your whole universe. Your beautiful emphasis on her eyes will make the reader mad at your poem. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations for being picked as members POD.

The title of your poem is so sweet and there is something special within your name. Who needs gift cards. It is pure love and chocolate that captures our hearts.

What a wonderful poem! You have described eyes so immaculately! Many congratulations for this lovely poem being chosen as POD!

I know this to be a work of fiction, because nothing can be sweeter than Ferrero Rocher. Of course, if you are young and in love, the senses can be addled somewhat; so I will believe that the author is young and truly in love. You create a few very strong, engaging images here; I would encourage even more to fill out your work. Bravo.

Splendid is love, when in love.. congratulations on your poem of the day.. James McLain

Very sweet eyes. Adorable poem of love! Loved it. Congratulations!

Congrats, she must be having chocolate eyes sweeter than Ferrero Rocher, alovely poem.

your eyes sparkle with true love.......true love on Valentine's Day. Beautiful poem on love.

you asked if I would read your new poem 'Suicide' by I have for personal reasons to read one of your other poems 'Valentine Novel'. A lovely poem, with love running through it from first word to last.

A sweet and beautiful work. May your life be rosy like the colour in the poem. Thank you for sharing.

There was this image that has spoken to me: your eyes guide the love to my veins Travels through, hits my heart so deep. Eyes have this power, to communicate intentions, to enhance emotions. May the girl you love travel along with you in this journey of life :)

Beautiful