Saturday, February 7, 2009

Valentine Moon. Comments

Rating: 5.0

So many hearts now peering towards you,
Pleading you hear as you grace each night sky.
Tis time soon for speaking of love, perhaps new
But unspoken. Valentines Day draws nigh,
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Fay Slimm
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I would settle for second, third, fourth, Fifth I just want a visit. 10

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Viola Grey 07 February 2009

I love the lines you have written here Fay...but, I confess...I have no interest in Valentines...you do seem to make it sound enticing though....nice work

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Kris Smith 07 February 2009

What a pull the moon has for us all lets all bathe in her glow 10 +++ Chris

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Catrina Heart 07 February 2009

I'll make my call on the midnight of 0001...great poem here...10

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Ency Bearis 07 February 2009

Can my heart be included on that many that peering towards you? Uhm.... A nice theme and beautiful write...lovely...10

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Tsira Goge 07 February 2009

So many hearts now peering towards you, ................................................................... Beautiful and true poems...10.. Best wishes, Tsira

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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