Valentine-Devotee Comments
Have I such power to stand beside you,
No, no; methink no bother about you.
Oh mistress, I, why repent for you
Though it is certain that I not for you.
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congrats for being selected as the POD! well penned! God bless!
A lost love is always painful, at least on such holy occasions
THE LAST PART: .........................AS I SAID: the words seem so unfinished, I dunno why, izzit the grammar, the construction or just the language, they seem like pieces of words, one by one glued together, but you ended the poem as a Valentine Devotee.............lamenting.............and you have got this Title, I am happy for you, boy! ..........CONGRATULATIONS as Member Poem Of The Day. Hurray! ............................Enjoy the day.
Love as much as you can. Otherwise Criticise as much as Eliot done. Haha 😀
You'll surely be a GOOD POET, Chayan. Keep the pen wet and the mind OPEN.
HAVING READ ONCE AGAIN, I wanna tell you this, but I mean what I said in these TWO responses, you have written a lovely poem, BUT what I wanna say next to this is, as a CRTITIC: It seems that I woke up at midnight and read this poem, or did I dream? No, on the contrary, this is real, it just occurred real....but the words seem so unfinished, I dunno why, izzit the grammar, the construction or just the language, they seem like pieces of words,
Yea, to criticise a work is also an art. Obviously it seems unfinished or mismatched when you go through two or three times. It may be that I have not tactfully used the words. However, you are welcome.
Life is oft like this, but you have created a fervent poem with ardent words, but on the eve of Valentine's day you are lamenting...........but you as a Member Poem Of The Day worth! CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen, Hurray! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem, magnificently worded, with us.
In this Valentine also, terror attack has saddened me...14/2/19
Alas! poor rose! now I have so much But in this holy day no one to touch, /// wonderful expression ROSE in poverty even in this HOLY day! valentine day is HOLY day! sometimes LOVE lives in melodramatic feelings!
don't lament over your love. it always leaves a beautiful fragrance behind even it leaves us for ever
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7/19/2025 7:35:01 PM # 1.0.0
A nice perspective and aspect about valentine beautifully presented. Congrats on Poem of the Day.