Tuesday, February 11, 2020

Valentine Day Calls Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am not calling you towards a God
that differs from person to person.
I am not calling you towards a nation,
having different landscapes and flags.
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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 February 2020

I am calling you to a small house/where there is a bouquet of rainbow colors/where an innocent girl is standing on the doors/looking again and again on a few days old crescent....lovely expression sir! Appreciated this fabulous poem....10/10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 February 2020

A flawless summing up, Akhtar Sir! I like very much to read and reread your poems, only............since I am still giving lecrtures, time does not allow me to read most poems I like, but it's OK.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 February 2020

2) Please, don't take my pun too serious, thank you so much for sharing this smoothly flowing poem, Akhtar Sir! Added a 10 TOPscore and myriad 10's more.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 February 2020

Each poet is unique and so are you with this finest Valentine's poem, ditto a unique Valentine's verses. The atmosphere in happiest mood, much delicious food, the house and floor cleanest scrubbed by her housekeeper. Not by her, Akhtar Sir! She would be his Valentine, but not his housekeeper, SIR! the instant meeting is warmed up, WOW! What a warmest welcome! It seems you're the matchmaker of the girl in this poetical venue.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 February 2020

hope she accepted you for a second innings @75 God bless her life she will continue as a beautiful wife HAPPY VALENTINE TO HER FOR RE SELECTING JA Ji YE

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 February 2020

A beautiful poem of love and hope. A vivid depiction of simple life yet there is always true love, peace and contentment. A one of a kind write beautifully crafted. So apt for Valentine's Day. Happy Valentine's Day, Sir Akhtar.

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 February 2020

beautiful Valentine Poem Valentine Day Yes the Valentine Day not for the specific God not for the specific gods or goddesses not for the specific nation, country, human, heart or soul The Valentine Day for you, for s/he, for me, for us, for everyone of this world...........///

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