Tuesday, February 10, 2015

Valentine Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

You say don't celebrate a Valentine Day,
Do you love my friend a Serpentine Day?
A day on that the schools are attacked,
Innocent children and teachers are sacked,
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Bri Edwards 11 March 2019

i'll take a chocolate heart rather than a ripped out heart any day of the week! bri :)

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Valsa George 11 February 2015

In a war torn world, what is needed most is love leading to brotherhood and harmony! Let the dove of peace fly aloft across our troubled skies! A great exhortation to the the world to rejoice in love's victory over hatred and enemity!

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Khalida Bano Ali 10 February 2015

A great message of love, a beautiful poem.................10

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Rajnish Manga 10 February 2015

Hats off to you, Sir, for this wonderful and thought-provoking poem (as well as the elaborate notes) . Apart from its lyrical content, the poem makes a desperate attempt to promote love and harmony in a world which is torn by strife and the blood of humanity. I want to quote the poem in toto but restrict myself to a couple of lines: We see on the roads only hot red flood / Various human parts showered in blood, ... / Don't imprison Islam in the funny cages / It's an elastic ethics for all ages / Come on my friends and let me embrace / We need direly to exchange the grace.

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