Friday, February 1, 2008

Valentine Comp Poem 1 Comments

Rating: 5.0

She sent me out in the rain
When I forgot to get a card one year
And has moaned for a score of years and more
That my teeth fell out and not my hair
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David Harris
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JoAnn McGrath 02 February 2008

I think it is a kinky line...Moan a Minute...hehehe....>: O) ....slap my hand for that comment...

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Alison Cassidy 02 February 2008

This is very cute David. It seems to me that Valentines Day, like meringue style weddings, is essentially a 'girl' thing. Love your 'moan a minute' line. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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