Sunday, February 11, 2018

Valentine At Seventy (Humour) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Do not send me a bouquet red
Of fragrant roses which I dread
I will forget to water them
Then you will frown and say ahem!
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Loke Kok yee
COMMENTS
Bri Edwards 19 September 2018

Bro, to the upcoming October showcase this goes via Express service. look for it everywhere SOON (well, soon enough) . Thanks, bri :) bri :)

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Bri Edwards 28 August 2018

(cont.) That one is for YOU and your BRIDE! YOURS IS FOR MyPoemList. bri :) it is truly outstanding. you/misconstrue is very clever. and you speak of sweets and end up with Sweetly said! ! !

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Bri Edwards 28 August 2018

Not tonight, Dear? Finally you've sent a picture of yourself, and of your mate! Is 'she' an ancient elf? I bet you two are still very hot in your bed; that's why, at night, the blanket, you do shed. (cont.)

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Mj Lemon 31 March 2018

This poem is proof positive that true love is universal and is constrained by no bounds. To myfavourites list. I missed it this Valentine's Day but will now have it for future dates.

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Loke Kok Yee 01 April 2018

I am quite useless write on this subject, but I can manage if I throw in a bit of humour! Thanks Mj

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Simone Inez Harriman 20 February 2018

What a lovely poem for Valentines day! Three little words do mean so much. I love the picture accompanying your poem. Humor is essential for a long happy life together. Couples who have a good laugh together survive the knocks.

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Loke Kok Yee 01 April 2018

Thank you Simone, humour makes everything right.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 February 2018

Let me start from the picture: I salute their intense love for each other! Love always conquers time...Your poem is a unique presentation on Valentine's Day! I have posted a poem entitled, 'Valentine's Day: The First Love'....If I compare both the poems i see a common feature that true love is eternal starting from its infancy to doom! A lovely poem on the eve of Valentine's Day!

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loke kok yee 18 February 2018

Thank you Dr Dillip, Thank you for your visiy and comment.

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Akhtar Jawad 13 February 2018

Enjoyed this lovely poem, love is for the whole life, so what if one is seventy or seventy plus even.

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loke kok yee 18 February 2018

Thank you sir, you are absolutely correct, love knows no age.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 11 February 2018

Loke, Loke, You are the most humorous poet in PH Love is not just for young people but for all ages. Like the couple in the picture, they may not have teeth, but they look so happy. That's all that matters. One who can see beyond the body, is the true love. Just the three magical words can raise you to spiritual heights. Thank you Loke, for this lovely poem.

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loke kok yee 18 February 2018

Thanks Geeta, Humour keeps things going; especially when you get old.

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