Valentine At Seventy-2 Comments

Hello dear Poet Loke. So happy to see you back in PH after a long, long time. Such a lovely rhythmic Valentine poem, expressing a tender love so divine. Beautiful....10

" My lovelorn heart for you do pine" ... " does pine" The photo reminds me of a casket/corpse photo. I can't tell if someone died or 'left' a relationship some other way. It sounds like the relationship ended but maybe got rekindled somehow. hmm? nice rhyming repine: intransitive verb To be discontented or low in spirits; complain or fret. intransitive verb To yearn after something. bri :) to MyPoemList

Wonderful sentiment and well written. Thanks.