Monday, September 14, 2015

Vainglory (Tanka) Comments

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Ego is climbing
on integrity treading—
wounds in pyramid
at peak in illusive Light
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 September 2015

Truely envisioned. Ego is vainglory and we should be away from this. It is a marvellous tanka I like most.. Thanks for sharing. ....10

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Terry Craddock 18 September 2015

Because I loved this poem so much, I had to write a poem inspired by a few of my thoughts on the verse, a topic and images which always intrigues me. Many of Mihaela's poems inspire me to write or simply enjoy and for this I thank you :) Soul Lifelong Lesson Transformations Man's soul is a lifelong lesson learning carrying us through transformation of flesh carrying us through transformation of feelings emotions mind stirring evolutions Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Vainglory' by Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to Mihaela Pirjol.

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Terry Craddock 17 September 2015

absolutely enjoyed your wonderful verse today 'Ego is climbing on integrity treading — wounds in pyramid at peak in illusive Light' yes Man's soul is a lifelong lesson, carrying us through transformation of flesh, carrying us through transformation of feelings emotions mind evolutions :)

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David Wood 17 September 2015

How the mighty live in vainglory and how the mighty then fall. Good Tanka

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