Saturday, April 22, 2017

Vain World Comments

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The world is vain
It is not without drain
It is for the brainy
To realize without strain
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Azeez Ogundiran
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Dr Antony Theodore 01 May 2017

the rhythms, the fine endings of the lines. it is fine my dear poet. u told about the brainy people. but is my experience that the so called brainy people creates havocs for others. the simple people who can love, simple love create a beautiful world. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 01 May 2017

Very short but impressive. Thanks

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Qiniso Mogale 22 April 2017

The World is vain indeed! Nice poem

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