Monday, May 30, 2016

Vain Thoughts Comments

Rating: 4.8

Barren heights!
With the hot wind blowing across the land;
And the desert was made bare.
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Edward Kofi Louis
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Edward Kofi Louis 21 May 2018

Swifter than eagles! ! Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Mihaela Pirjol 31 May 2016

'' This is a world of greed, lies and hypocrisy and parasites.'' - I totally agree with Mr. Mohabeer Beeharry. A powerful poem; especially the last stanza.

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Mohabeer Beeharry 30 May 2016

Absolutely good advice. But how many are prepared to take it. This is an world of greed, lies and hypocrisy and parasites. I like this writing and I hope it falls on some good human beings. Mohabeer Beeharry

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Untamed Heart 30 May 2016

very true. a great message to everyone. Wash your hearts from wickedness and live; Clean your minds with the works of the truth, Without vain thoughts! ! ! like these lines.

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