Vagrant Thoughts Comments

very strong emotions, emoting the truth of life.well penned and straightforward! ritty

what you have written is a blatent truth and it has been penned aptly. shan

a very emotional write...the doubt that what if everything goes in vain is i think the biggest fear which does'nt let us live naturally...very thought provoking

hmm...true..... i guess this one comes from a real experience...... its heartfelt. thanks.

Valid theory, whether it be, lifestyle, love, business or sport.You are quite adept, at architecting tight, short cropt phrasage...that delivers with poetic impact, and moves with fresh fluxion.Solid Work, Vaibhav. F j R 2009

unique thoughts....strong piece striking concepts... a piece so valuable...poured with all emotions... from a heart that care... sensitive to other's feelings and life in vain.... true to your thoughts..Life is not really easy....10+++++

Hi, Vaibhav, Very sensitive poems... I think that sad moods only temporarily triumphs to you..., I wish good luck ... 10...... /Thank you.../ Best wishes, Tsira

Good strong write here Vaibhav...enjoyed it...

I loved this piece, the way it begins, and the fist stanza was what really got me.

'It's easier said than done' is no unknown saying, but the way you have set this theme re-rolling is not easy to emulate!

I think you make an excelent case for how life's a crapshoot. The omnipresence of revelations, paradigms, delusions seized by the unshakeable conviction that — hopefully just once — tranquility and exhilaration will reveal itself proactively.

very well penned....love this one!

this is wow! ! ! ! Phenomenal...Incredible....Fantastic... i dont know what to say but this is really F**king good! ! ! wow! ! ! your good... for real good. Becca

Good one :) Like the way you started out in the poem..

Pain and its curiosity is expressed so eloquently, something all can relate, but few can convey as this.

Your writing is not in vane, you are sensitive and emotional and it is felt by your reader, I am happy to have read your work........10

always is and will be easy to say and hard to do....world is oft quite uncaring of the pains and rewards with peanuts.....

Life will only be thus if you will it to be so. May your life be long and free of pain. Very well expressed

A thought that chills the blood when dived deep into the poem.

your vagrant thoughts are really so meaningful--- its true its far easier to say all this but when we have to actually play our part its so difficult well written --10 anju