Friday, November 13, 2015

Vagrant Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let's suppose there was a man
who when but a youngster ran
far away from all he knew—
father, home, and country, too—
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COMMENTS
Bill Cantrell 03 September 2017

Ah, only for you would I read a poem this long, my attention span is short lived, but it was worth the reading....I knew there was a moral to the story! , yes simular scenarios in christianity is well, lessons learned in life, your style of wording the story with your nuances certainally polishes the meaning in a here and now understanding, I really enjoyed it

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Harley White 04 September 2017

I well understand the reluctance to read such a lengthy poem. It’s such a great and universal parable that I felt a long one was needed. The fact that you “really enjoyed it” is the goal I hoped for, so I’m pleased to know that! Thank you! Reading through it again myself brought to mind that, for some unknown reason, one of my favorite parts of the poem occurs almost halfway through in the following lines which stand out for me as perhaps a typical human response… The son remained at the gate, so awed by the grand estate with its luxury ornate and of the dominion great he feared the elder must hold that he shivered as from cold. As a final note, I appreciate that Poem Hunter permits me to post such long poems, as well as notes and supporting information! Many other sites do not…

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Kim Barney 15 November 2015

Very nice. Spock the Vegan told me about this poem or I never would have seen it. Well done.

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Harley White 04 January 2017

I appreciate your telling this, Kim. And thank you very much...

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Spock The Vegan 13 November 2015

Very, very good.10+++

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Harley White 04 January 2017

Thank you, kind sir, for your encouraging words...

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Shakil Ahmed 13 November 2015

nice poem, beautiful end rhyme, thanks for sharing,

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Harley White 04 January 2017

Thank you for your gracious comment and for reading it...

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