Sunday, September 13, 2015

Vagrant Comments

Rating: 4.3

Upon the streets
Leading nowhere
Where wind and rain
Erase the sands of time
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Michael Patrick Hunt
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Pamela Sinicrope 13 September 2015

Another lovely poem and juxtaposition between cities and plains. It reminds me of when I got lost all alone in the Navajo Nation and when I walked outside in Alaska in February. Again adept use of language and imagery. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Thanks for sharing.

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Michael Hunt 13 September 2015

Thank you so much for reading, and I am glad you enjoyed it! I have always wanted to visit Alaska, it seems like such a beautiful place!

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Miraj Raha 13 September 2015

very well depiction of a vagrant.liked it.

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Michael Hunt 13 September 2015

Thank you for your kind words. I am glad you liked it!

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