Sunday, December 14, 2014

Vagabond Thoughts Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see many charms in my mortal life,
Life that angels dream and desire!
Desire that forced them to burn their wings,
Wings that lead to a world of desire,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Hazel Durham 19 June 2015

Outstanding write with so much beauty on this earth, but to love is the greatest gift of all to mankind to transform peoples lives into a paradise!

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Salini Nair 15 December 2014

Desire that forced them to burn their wings, .......................beautiful

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 15 December 2014

These are very noble thoughts to wish so many creative things and at length to wish earth transformed unto a paradise.................amazing piece of poetry.....10/10

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Valsa George 15 December 2014

Reading your poem I have got a novel idea of writing a poem....... begin from where you end! Let me also try this form one day! Yes, with love, the Earth is turned into a Paradise! Enjoyed!

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