Saturday, April 12, 2014

Vagabond Soul Comments

Rating: 2.7

Here I am in a house full of people,
Me in my empty house.
Here is a home for many settled souls,
Though mine is vagabond.
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Argentine Tango
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Hannah Kelly 05 May 2014

I really like the way you've expressed the feeling of loneliness within a crowd, particularly the association with the home. It's a really lovely poem!

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Perry Biggerstaff 27 April 2014

Wow....love it. The worst kind of loneliness is feeling alone in the crowd. (saving to favorites)

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Marco Angelo 13 April 2014

sometimes we live in a house full of people or full of living. but we feel lonely inside. that is a nice one. perfetto....vero..

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