Monday, February 1, 2010

Vagabond Of Beauty Comments

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Appearance is sometimes alluring
It hides the real core of its color that is occurring
And fogs the nature of vastness deep within
Could block your eyes from the notorious acts which were hidden
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Sheldon Allen Saluta
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Eyan Desir 28 July 2010

Nice title good write ...............

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Kim Davies 10 March 2010

I love this poem, beautifully written yet a lesson for us all.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 03 March 2010

wow... oh my.... you are amazing.... nice write!

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Jude Ogunade 01 February 2010

Allen Sheldon, I like your poem, 'Vagabond of Beauty'. There is actually a bond between vagaries and beauty; though Shakespeare said, 'beauty is in the eye of the beholder, and that which we call a rose by any other name will smell as sweet' Life is full of surprises, gold is found in dirts sometimes and many at times are we left in awe at the beauty concealed in innocence and modesty. Actually, only those with feeble minds will think beauty is cosmetics. Thanks for this inspiration. Nice poem!

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