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C'mon let's place
the sun and mountains
where they belong
let's do some simple housekeeping
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a beautiful visual metaphor: ''C'mon let's place the sun and mountains where they belong '' suggesting the immensity of thoughts... and cognitive metaphor; ''come let's vacuum our vacuums come let's be strangers again'' suggesting the emptiness of feelings and the reason for the imminence of separation... a symbolical poem....in which thoughts remove the feelings from soul and have the necessary strength to do this....10++
Liked the way you adorn your poems with apt metaphors and words...
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7/31/2025 10:20:01 AM # 1.0.0
hey, this idea sounds perfect!