Friday, October 16, 2015

Vacation Is Over Comments

Rating: 4.8

I had lots of vacation,
went swimming and biking.
I went to the train station,
because I wanted to go hiking.
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Howard Savage 02 January 2016

a clean realistic poem.

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Tristan Machado 23 October 2015

Good writing Kevin. I enjoyed reading it and looking at the visual.

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Kelly Kurt 16 October 2015

Don't apologize for writing, Kevin. Just keep writing.

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Kevin Fang 26 October 2015

thanks!

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Kevin Fang 16 October 2015

sorry! The end was messed up.

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Kevin Fang 16 October 2015

Enjoy the poem! This is not that good, but still, please enjoy the poem!

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