Friday, March 2, 2018

Vacant Eyes Comments

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I seen her vacant eyes.
Before, we called it blues.
Now, it appears outfitted in sublime cues.
Wearing cloudy plum swirls.
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Bree Z Love
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 March 2018

A poignant write well executed. Very touching.

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Rajnish Manga 02 March 2018

This speaks volumes about those whose quest for fulfillment of desires remains a dream forever. So sad and touching portrayal. Thanks.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 March 2018

Bree, such an awesome write๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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Aldrich Suarez 02 March 2018

it is a sad poem...this is good for the die-hard blues

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Bree Z Love

Bree Z Love

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