Wednesday, August 6, 2014
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My heart is empty inside
-vacío-
a fortress sealed tight
letting nothing and no one in
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Nika McGuin
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Sandra Feldman
06 August 2014
Muy bien su reloj -Corazon. Very good your heart-clock. Excellente!
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8/5/2025 10:29:57 AM # 1.0.0
VOID is such a desolate word, I think I'm scared of it. But I like the second stanza of your poem. It seems to be raised higher in expectation, even consciousness than those that frame it. I will a-void those two and concentrate on the middle. ITS ALARM SET TO SOME UNKNOWN TIME. That could be random or set by an outside force, but it will come as a surprise for you. NOTHING WILL EVER BE THE SAME. Total change! It's exciting and welcome as long as ALL'S WELL THAT ENDS WELL. tick-tick-tick-tick....