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Vaasu
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Vaasu was my classmate in the primary school. He did not go beyond the primary classes and when I reached the secondary school, he was not with me. But, it is not about our schooldays that I am speaking about.
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Evelyn Judy Buehler 14 May 2024

I enjoyed reading this captivating story of from your past. Unnikrishnan. I loved how the mystery unraveled, and then was finally solved. Lovely writing!

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Real life incident, Evelyn. Thank you for your kindness.

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" took law in their hands" means they beat up Vaasu, left, right and centre.

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Late E V Krishnapillai whom I have referred to in the "Note" was father large Adoor Bhasi, one of the finest actors Malayalam cinema has ever seen. But, he specialised in comedian roles and the label stuck to him

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Santhi Janardanan 11 May 2024

I am sorry the comment I was writing got published before I finished. I was laughing when I came to know that collecting taxes meant theft. I was taken back to my parents ' village in Kerala where I spent my vacation. Vasu is a notorious thef. I really loved the way you have written.

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Santhi Janardanan 11 May 2024

Haha! Actually, I was laughing when I understood that night taxes meant theft. You writing took me back to my Village in

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Comments made on this poem by fellow poets seem to have vanished into thin air… can ph help us?

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Liked how you crafted the last stanza. You allow your readers to participate and give insight to this wonderful poem. I think the knowledge of your classmate as regards the ownership of the orchard will deter him from visiting the same. Great poem. Top Marks! .

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Maybe, maybe not!

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A very interesting and engaging story. Great remembrance and memories of the past. Sometimes people never had the drive to improve their life. They want to have money through the easiest way even it is illegal.

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Thank you, Rose Marie. Loved your notes, dear poet.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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