Where the beaten, acorn littered
Path divides itself into two
beside a thorny skin ripping
leafless bush.
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A beautiful poem that manages to relive the past through a glimpse of the present! Brian
This is great Vincent, I love your description, took me right there. Very nice poem, Moyaxx
Irresistible title, well-painted picture of lost youth and innocence poignantly set against the backdropp of nature's ever-changing landscape. With warmth, Gina.
I suspected where the poem was headed, but it was still a joy to travel along. Nice imagery and alliteration. -chuck