Thursday, April 13, 2006

V.T 4 E.P (Lovers Words Engraved On A Tree) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Where the beaten, acorn littered
Path divides itself into two
beside a thorny skin ripping
leafless bush.
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Chuck Audette 14 April 2006

I suspected where the poem was headed, but it was still a joy to travel along. Nice imagery and alliteration. -chuck

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Brian Dorn 13 April 2006

A beautiful poem that manages to relive the past through a glimpse of the present! Brian

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Moya Levy 13 April 2006

This is great Vincent, I love your description, took me right there. Very nice poem, Moyaxx

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Gina Onyemaechi 13 April 2006

Irresistible title, well-painted picture of lost youth and innocence poignantly set against the backdropp of nature's ever-changing landscape. With warmth, Gina.

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