Tuesday, July 9, 2013

Uttarakhand (Acrostic) Comments

Rating: 2.8

Uttarakhand, The Land of the Gods,
That got struck by the natural disaster,
Teared apart the joyous trip of innocents,
And devastated the families of many!
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Ramesh Rai 25 July 2013

A great write about a great disaster. Indian Army proved to be Hero to tackle such situation. This proves we can never challenge the nature so we should make the nature our friend.

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C. P. Sharma 11 July 2013

Good attempt........

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 July 2013

Well written.....Good poem....well said.

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Valsa George 10 July 2013

This is a beautiful acrostic Kavya! Very realistic and unlaboured!

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Jenie Franksay 09 July 2013

well potrayed. good write. check out my latest poem. awaited for your comments.

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