Friday, August 19, 2016

Utopia Is Everywhere Today! Comments

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A citizen confides to his Doctor:
A demon inhabits my space: his clawed feet
jab my back, his arms encircle my neck
and choke me for hours each day. Very often,
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Daniel Brick
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Nosheen Irfan 19 August 2016

You have beautifully encompassed life in these verses. The whole spectrum of today's life is placed before the reader's eyes. From different viewpoints, the world might look varied but all angles connect on one point, that is, utopia. Calling mental emptiness a blessed state sounds satirical. Perhaps we can find or see utopia around us only when our minds are empty. It's a profound political satire. That's how i interpret it Daniel. Would like some words from you because i'm not sure about my interpretation. lol.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 19 August 2016

A brilliantly envisioned thought provoking poem compelling to compare today's so called utopia with dystopia. Thanks for sharing. Regards.

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