*utopia* Comments

Know it all that Utopia is quite an imaginary place. If have the will we can make our utopia right here on our earth. Top score

I think utopia can be used to describe paradise. An insightful poem nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

So did u write this wondrful utopian poem? If people chose other means than violence then this utopia cud be real. Lovely rhymin. I hope u read my latest poem too.

HI, MERNA.IT'S A GREAT POEM, BUT TRY TO BE MORE POETIC.THANKS.

hope you will be there early

I think utopia is the best place for you.I think that you need angels to deal with, we really need an ideal society as in utopia.

Oh I know why utopia isn't there It can never be found anywhere With all those differences to bare it's known that utopia wouldn't dare. And that's utopia's little snare there's too much hate for prayer, and that's why utopia's so rare; that's why utopia is nowhere. a poet friend RH Peat

bravo! it is veeeeeeerrrryyyyyyyyyy.......very....very..oh my god i don't know what 2 say it is a very digestive poem i used the word digestive 2 prepare myself for the biology next term.nice, nice, nice.it is simple meaningful wonderful poem.

So cute...I hope the whole world is like that 100.............................................++++++++++++++

so lovely land, I can see it, it's not far it's in my mind, in the mind of each reader too! ! ! I like it so much Thanks For Sharing Sister!

thanks Merna for opening the gates to Utopia! ! And you in a way have made us realise that PH is our online Utopia!

Utopia is the place where Merna gets Nobel Prize Utopia is the place where Merna is a leader of Wise.....a good write...

amazing! ! .. in Utopia, i can read such a soft & tender poem.. anywhere on the earth could be a Utopia, if we keep dreamig about it.. also, poetry will help reach there.. good imagination is speaking through your lines, Merna.. thanks4sharing! !

Beautiful poem. A very well penned. I wish to find a beautiful land like the one you have described here Lovely piece. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me

it's not difficult for angels like you to go to utopia....specially if they can write like this wonderful poem....nice rhyme too....(aywa ba2a ya merna) : D

I really really wish I really could be there wonderful surrealistic poem 10

Really.. great one, Ryhme is fanatstic, and I wish really there was a place like this ever existed.10++

that is so impressing you make me want to be there in that wonderful island i'm sure that Plato didn't know what will be in our century i'm and if so, he couldn't ever think about it hehe, it's out of reach keep it up Merna you are a great poetess 10+++

To be in utopian land is not fair You may have all means with free air It is like climbing to sky on stair Are you sure of going there? No sadness or to say no despair is not fair Until we pollute, it is always pure air As human being, you should always have envy Hypocrisy and jealousy always carry Utopian land is free for all Utopia is a place where you can find pure air A place where everyone is kind, polite and fair...............i feel you want to run away from real world...there is no joy if they are missing from us...lovely poem Merna...Good luckto you..find my response as under: - lovely 10 too ------------------------------- To be in utopian land is not fair You may have all means with free air It is like climbing to sky on stair Are you sure of going there? No sadness or to say no despair is not fair Until we pollute, it is always pure air As human being, you should always have envy Hypocrisy and jealousy always carry Utopian land is free for all You can find place with simple call As dreamer you can always visit Angles may take you there if you insist Ride on wings with high ideals Everything bad here is for the real You may not digest if there is complete peace I wish you there to live with ease enjoy it..it is for u..reply

I really really wish I really could be there But going to Utopia's a big affair. This poem is revised by the great poet'John Knight' wow sweet poem about utopia..really what you said here is true and heart feeling..the idea has penned professionally and the expression as a whole is very poetic and soul touching..a good and inspiring task... well done merna..10/10