Friday, February 20, 2009

Usual Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

Morning broken by reality's fist
swollen faces, frowning mouths
greet that first glorious ray from the sun.
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Elizabeth Jacqueline Mpanga
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 14 March 2009

A bitter but true actuality of life. A very well worded poem with vast and deep meanings and realities. Really good one, Elizabeth. Please keep on writing such mature and beautiful poems.......10/10. Best wishes Naseer

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Patrick McFarland 20 February 2009

A bit of Yeats' 'Second Coming' here Elizabeth. Nice work.10

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