Monday, November 7, 2011

Used To Be Comments

Rating: 4.5

We used to be friends
and said we would
be there for each other
til the end
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Sara Panicali
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Cat Hodgson 13 November 2011

People come into our life sometimes for just a fleeting time and some for a life time.. I say don't dwell.. find another and make her close.. Good expession.. Cat

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Harindhar Reddy 11 November 2011

There heaven-sent charm in your poems. I like the repetition of Idea even I do the same with my poems. A good poem with great message. Yes once last is last forever! 'We used to be friends til you pushed me away' 10++++++++++++++++++

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 07 November 2011

glad you are over him and i am glad that you can walk with pride after him realizing that you are the more sincere one your poem tells a story of everyone and they will glad you told their story in a poem ten votes for this bravo

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Abdallah Gamal 07 November 2011

Although it seems so sad but the loyalty and sincerity are what drew a beautiful pic. full of passion and love colors. All Sara's poems show a great mean of loyalty and sincerity, they were drawn beautifully by her, and this poem is like my poem ((I'll remain faithful to you whatever you do)) ,

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