Monday, June 2, 2008

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You took my heart, tore it apart,
Pretending to love me, there in the dark.
You laughed as if I were a joke,
I cried, you mean old bloke.
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Melvina Germain
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Mj Lemon 14 October 2015

There is great passion and soul here. As long as we don't abandon our humanity as we grow, we can thrive...A great poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 June 2015

I cried! ! ! With the muse of love and pain. Nice work; and, thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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