Monday, May 29, 2006

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I'm a' frettin' on what's goin' on
Mad as hell at the whole world,
Seems like every thing's goin' all wrong,
He walks in the door, takes one glance
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Kristin Nicole RothDavis
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Ebone' Ingram 07 August 2006

I love the way you write the titles. Very interesting poem. Eni da Kid

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Ruby Root 07 July 2006

Hi Kristin, Excellent Poem. I really love your expressions. You are a talented writer. You write with good imagery and form. This is a excellent write. Take care.

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Esther Leclerc 17 June 2006

Sweet poem, Kristin... very. You be well... very. Prayers for you, Esther : ]

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JOIN AN EXCLUSIVE CLUB KRIS...WE ALL KNOW ALL TOO WELL ABOUT THE PH GLITCHMONSSTER....BUT LET US NOW TALK ABOUT SOMETHING OH SO MUCH FINER & ENJOYABLE, LIKE YOUR NEWEST WORK W/ A TITLE OF ABSTRACTIVITY TO MUSE THE PARAGONED MIND OF MY IDOL, Mr. POE...EXCELLENT EMOTION DELIVERY...TUGS& TWEAKS THE VENFRICLES OH SO WARMLY....YOU ARE BACK IN BUSINESS, YOUNG LADY.....NOW, STAND UP......CURTSAY! ! .....CAN YOU NOT FEEL THAT CLAMOROUS APPLAUSE? ...WISH I KNEW HOW TO inser ONE...lol, KRIS... FRANK....BTB>>>10 FOR THE RETURN OF THE POETESS K....O FOR THE PH GLITCHMONSTER....

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Kristin Davis 29 May 2006

Hey fellow readers.... Just wanted to show acknowledgment that I am aware of the word 'insert' in the 3rd to the last line is misspelled... No matter what I do on here this site wont allow it to be changed...GRRRR... anyways... I've spent way too much time tying to perfect this poem over that one word... =(

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Kristin Nicole RothDavis

Kristin Nicole RothDavis

Southern Oklahoma... <country gal here>
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