Wednesday, November 16, 2005

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Rating: 4.5

You could curse at me
You could hit me
But that wont change
The way I feel about you
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Kristina Fleissner
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Jon Lloyd 16 November 2005

Nice work (but don't put yourself down!) Look forward to reading more of your stuff. PS - small typo on penultimate line. Jon

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Saginaw, Michigan
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