Tuesday, December 11, 2012

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A thing of endless wants, with falsity to match
I see us everywhere, our legions on the march

Talking up hypocrisy and brandishing the cross
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jim hogg
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Tsira Gogeshvili 24 December 2012

Hi Jim ... Talking up hypocrisy and brandishing the cross Talking meritocrazy so long as we're the boss... For such lines I love reading your verses... :) Tsira12

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Iris Blue 17 December 2012

A powerful piece of observation on humanity - by attributing all our successes to ourselves and our failings to something or someone else our failings are never simply down to 'us', yet it is 'us' and only 'us' that are responsible for the decisions and choices we make and the paths that we follow...effortless rhymes to accompany your poetic reasoning...

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