Tuesday, April 13, 2010

Uruk! Comments

Rating: 5.0

You'd thought they learnt by past mistakes
How many lives that it must take
To learn where youth and laughter go
To fight in war for one last show
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Elena Sandu 30 June 2010

My friend! Your poems are not quite a joy, don't bring a smile, but always what they say sticks to the brain for many days! Your poems are ringing bells showing the wrongs and asking for a gathering of thoughts to search how we can change the wrongs in rights..I can learn a lot from you.. ..and some important thing, I think: ..I do agree with every written word of yours. Thank you!

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Sherri Coulter 13 April 2010

like ur poem........nice.........thanx

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Michael Brock 13 April 2010

Very true, very intense and the flow works very well, I enjoyed this poem very much thanks for sharing it Michael

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