Ursula's Fantasy. Comments

Sadly, I dont get the time to read much these days, but when I do, I make for your beautiful work everytime fay, just wonderful... Andy 10

Imaginative tale! Is there a time machine or anti-aging potion involved? -chuck

Fay this is amazing, it brought a smile with a hint of sadness, somewhat humorous while also sympathetic...awesome work! ! 10

Your poetic talent is so visble in this very poignant but beautiful poem Fay..You have explained Ursula's fantasy with such finesse - brings a tear to my eye...10++++

Cheated from love by a world gone mad has left a young girl incredibly sad pinning away for a love long gone seems an old familiar song

poignant and so lovely fay 10

Remarkable but sad history... You write beautifully and talently dear Fay, / For some reason for Ursula I have recollected the novel 'hundred years of loneliness' / 10.... Best wishes, Tsira