Ursa Hail Hank Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Ursa Hail Hank

Rating: 5.0


You and Me could have a Pristine Love
If You Walk In the Dark
Like a Lost Child.
You have A Gentle Touch
and A Poet's Heart.
Love Is Just a Teardrop.
In Time, Let There Be a Rose Garden
with A Lonely Walkway, A Beauty Unseen,
A Bit of a Fantasy
where A Humble Reward
is A Long Wet Kiss, Forbidden Fruit,
playing Hide and Seek
with a Damsel in the Cloud.
Oh, forgive my rambling,
I've done it since my youth;
it's A Poet's Dilemma With Truth.
I've Lost My Way, been like this for weeks,
And Softly Silence Speaks…

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Who is this poet? Many of his poem titles are used in the poem, or you can find his name by unscrambling the letters in the title of the poem.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 05 March 2022

1) Oft silence speaks surrendering sweetest tones, it sounds touching till within the bones, mingled with cheers and tears, be warned, it seldom disappears,

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 March 2022

2) the loveliest poem, excellently worded, which I enjoyed tremendously your melody captured my inside heart, dear Kim, till up the brim

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Unnikrishnan E S 05 March 2022

The voice of silence is soft and sweet, it is the most heard words. Very true and 5 *s for the beautiful poem, it's rhyme and magical choice of words phrases and images. But sorry, I could not solve the riddle.

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Khairul Ahsan 09 March 2022

Thanks to poet Bharati Nayak for drawing my attention to this poem. I myself wouldn't have been able to solve the riddle, but for her intelligent hints.

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Khairul Ahsan 09 March 2022

Thank you, dear poet Kim, for writing this wondeful poem taking lines from some of my poems and some from their titles. I am honoured, my poems have been honoured; thank you.

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Kim Barney 14 March 2022

You are welcome, Khairul. I have not logged in much lately and didn't realize until now that you had seen this. I think there are still one or two that haven't been solved yet.

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David Wood 07 March 2022

An enigma wrapped in a riddle surrounded by a mystery

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Bharati Nayak 06 March 2022

I was trying to solve the riddle for quite sometime and amazed to find the poet.The titles of poems looked familiar.A marvelous write for a wonderful poet friend from Bangladesh.Five star to the poem.

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Kim Barney 07 March 2022

Congratulations, Bharati. It's okay to reveal his name. Nobody else seems to be able to solve it.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 05 March 2022

Excellent Kim Bravo! Bravo!

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