Urn Of Encumbrance………silent Shriek Comments

Dark clouds and monsters sent To plod its breast and face rent dream and color doomed to end dreary black holes light too bend I am the person who is often gone with the wind.Here I met someone who is gone with the sun...heard his Silent Shriek.....found myself concerned....Thnx for the poem and you must get 10++ for your wide thought process.Luv - Brishti

Good puzzling poem...gives a thing or two to think over on leisurely hours...thanks Saadat...10

Member Ruth Walters 17873256 -.Urn of encumbrance………silent shriek Date & Time: 6/14/2009 6: 35: 00 AM Comment: Hi Saadat, just loved this poem apart from a couple of things that I would like tweaked or didn't understand fully? Please try to explain to me..... (moved to messages-saadat) Ruthy

you have a distinct style, doc...esp. the way your images are presented, are you a painter by any chance?

Your thought pattern and poetic diction are par excellent! ! ! ! !

Love this amazing poem.10+++

a lovely n different piece on earth.. nice writing.

The story of Earth, along with a description of Adam, trying to find his peace in the pairs of opposites, all splttered between the options, a nice poem. Well penned!