Wednesday, November 28, 2012

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Lyn Paul
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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 September 2021

Plant a seed/it is what we need... great slogan but many times we don't do it even we know it....a beautiful poem!

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bri edwards 23 December 2020

THE NEW PH FORMAT IS DISASTROUS. I THINK CLICKING ON PoemHunter.com, above, will take you to a page to write a complaint.

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Chuy Amante 04 September 2020

money is just one poor option stealing the many opportunities for a friendly adoption share and care is where riches lie so much more fun than buy, buy, buy

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 April 2020

A beautiful poem with a meaningful message. We cannot deny rhe importance of money. It enables one to put food on the table. And the basic necessities in life is sustainable. Yet, when life is centered on money and that everything revolves on it, then happiness in life ceases.to exist. When we are governed by money, the beauty of our heart is eliminated. Wonderfully written. Liked the form. It conveys the message of this marvelous write more powerful.

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Navod Dilhara 07 February 2020

A different sort of thinking. Thanks for sharing it with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 November 2019

A wonderful piece of work! I found a lot of substance from your last four lines! Extremely well penned......Full marks!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 October 2019

Germs galore; who cares I have plans For money. Money... Does it make the world turn Yes, No One day we will learn....outstanding conceptualization. Brilliant poem on money. Thanks again.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 August 2019

A brilliant poem on money has been touchingly inscribed. I visited this poem time and again for its lofty theme and nice graphic.

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Michael Walker 08 July 2019

We cannot escape the influence of money in life, which your poem illustrates so well. Money can cause considerable worries or some satisfaction, in my opinion.

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Adeeb Alfateh 07 July 2019

Money. Money, Such crime Money, People doing time Money. Money... superb 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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sharon coolidge 16 April 2019

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Britte Ninad 16 May 2018

it seems- everything encompassed into MONEY! ! nice writing

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Smoky Hoss 15 April 2018

Good poem here! The age old quandary....will more money bring joy, peace, comfort? For us? For others? For all? For none? Makes us ponder, as a good poem should. Thanks for that!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 November 2017

Money High cost of living Money. Money, Such crime....yes, money can bring high cost of living as well as it can lead to crime. Dear Lyn, you have so nicely inscribed the both sides of a coin. Beautiful poem with lofty insight! 10

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Bri Edwards 03 April 2017

p.s. i added an apostrophe to everyones....ok?

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Bri Edwards 03 April 2017

if you get TOO MUCH money (is there such a thing?) , i'm willing to share with you. that's what friends are FOR, right? ? this shall now go, kicking and screaming [Money, money, money! ! ! ! ] into my/our April 2017's showcase. Thanks. favorite lines: It is what we all need I want to plant you URGENTLY A Money tree. also into MyPoemList. bri :)

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Hans Vr 12 December 2016

I love the Abba song very much, and I love this poem very much too. It underlines the need of money and the need to love money. We all work for money, which is the very logical thing to do. I think the problem arises if we work for money all the time, then we become money's servant. Ideally, we work for money and then when it comes our way, it is logical that we make money work for us, we use it, enjoy it. If we just hoard and be frugal and keep working for it all the time, we become servant and money the boss. Imagine all these politicians, big pharma and bankers who have much more than they ever can spend, how different would life become if they stop selling their own principles and values for more and more and really decide to make money work for them rather than remaining a enslaved to money. Wow, Lyn, this is such a nice and thought provoking poem. Excellent!

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Christopher Tye 15 September 2016

Wonderful poem, it's all too easy to succumb to greed when thinking about money and forget there is much more of greater value in humanity.

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Geetha Jayakumar 06 August 2016

Beautiful write on truth. Money can buy many things, yet certain things money cannot buy. But greed for money is also not good. You conveyed a beautiful message through this poem. Loved reading it.

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Very truthful thought and it is a mirror talking to all Awesome idea

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