Urban Haiku Comments

this haiku sucks ass

Good portrayal of autumn like scenes-but- I hate to this to you: a haiku is a three lined 5-7-5 syllable poem.You don't have all the sylables in some of the lines.Since haiku means poem allowing for poetic license I supose you could call it a longer poem in freeform.It's fine I had to demote my Sonnet; To a Sailor from sonnet to a poem (Sonnet*) The Siren Sings to A Sailor because I could not get two lines to rhyme and try as might the efforts would have ruined the mood and flow of my poem.I feel it's more important sometimes to give life to the words.You write wonderfully.Thankyou for your poetic view.