Sunday, February 15, 2009

! ! ...Urban Afternoon...Part 1 Comments

Rating: 3.1

A woman drags her toddler
In panic, as she negotiates
The sun scorched city road
Avoiding the mad stampede
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Seema Aarella
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Indira Babbellapati 19 February 2009

...like watching an abstract play!

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Indira Renganathan 17 February 2009

Starting with the toddler to end with passing by a cemetry....your choice of words discourses in spate of description the urban afternoon highly....you are a very versatile observer and a versatile poet..excellent

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Seema Aarella

Seema Aarella

KGF, India
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