Sunday, May 15, 2011

Ur Close But Ur Not There... Comments

Rating: 4.8

You stand there;
Like you want to be near me...
But your actions;
They tell me you don't...
...
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 15 May 2011

Awesome work. Great imagery with nice style. Great write indeed. I rate it 10. TFS. Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2

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