Wednesday, December 27, 2017

Upstream Comments

Rating: 5.0

He walked upstream.
It was like he was in a dream.
He was thinking how he and his girlfriend had just verbally fought.
When out of the water onto the bank jumped a rainbow trout.
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Lamar Cole
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Bipasha D 08 January 2018

The poem is both sweet and humorous.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 December 2017

What an imaginative write. Excellently penned with great rhyme.10

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Rini Shibu 27 December 2017

Thanks to the rainbow trout for reminding his sweet dream.. Good one

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